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Rabu, 25 Mei 2011

Spending Holiday at Home or Going Vacation




Holiday is a time for fun, when you are free from your study, boring job, or your dangerous boss and be together with your family. People have many ways to spend it likes going vacation or stay at home with their families. Both of these ways are different, but both of them offer many advantages and variety activities. The purpose of this essay is to contras the cost, types of activities, and the experience when you spend the holiday at home or go vacation.


The difference between these ways is the cost to spend. Stay at home will save your money; you can cook your foods in your own house. Hhowever, go vacation will spend much money, you have to buy a ticket, you need to eat at a restaurant, stay at hotel and spend your time at the long trip that is make you feel tired so that you must prepare your holiday a year or two years before.

The other difference is the types of activities. The activities are limited, but sometimes become fun likes reading romantic novels, watching funny movies with you family, cleaning up your house together, and having dinner with your friends, it is exciting. Besides that, going vacation offer many activities. You can go to another country, see the amazing places and enjoy the nature.

Spending your holiday at home will not give you a big experience because it is almost same with your daily activity and little bit same with your friends.In other sides when you go vacation to other cities or countries you have an unforgettable experience and perhaps it will different from the other people in the world.

Everyone can choose how to spend his or her holiday. There are so many options to spend a holiday.If you have much money, go vacation is a great and fun choice, but if you are a student and have not much money, you can make an exciting holiday in your home with your family or your friends.

6 komentar:

  1. Your essay is good, but you need to do these things to make your essay became better. First, separate each paragraph with space. Then, revise it because there are some mistake like "hhowever". The last add some idea if you want.

    BalasHapus
  2. 'however' not 'Hhowever'
    in second paragraph, line 2

    BalasHapus
  3. hm.. i prefer spending my holiday at home with my family. beside it will save my money then i can do some activities together :)

    BalasHapus
  4. *Hhowever = however
    *I prefer to spend my holiday at home with my family..
    keep writing weny ;)

    BalasHapus
  5. I prefer to spend my holiday at home... because save more money and energy ... however I don't know who will I go vacation with... hhe^^

    BalasHapus
  6. i think stay at home is better to spend holiday :)

    BalasHapus